Your Own Lyrics.

[Coprophagia]

Share lyrics people, i like reading other peoples lyrics and now i share mine, its just a little personal one that i wrote for myself and now im sharing it.

"Slowly fading into the bleakness of reality
Letting go of everything that means
Despair is all that lives on
Everything i see reminds me of her
She gave me the strength to love
You gave me the reason to hate
Cold hearts and solid sand
Brugged by betrayl and lies
With a blink of an eye it leak's
Time clocking backwards before standing still
Why not take it all?
I can see your filthy face
Learking under the flesh
Self Pittying human, I can see all
Why couldnt you rectitude it all?
She'll be mine
You struggle to hold onto life
As you lay lifeless
I stand over and watch your body rot."

I don't like it. That is not to say that it's not good, just that I personally don't like it. It's all very...predictable. All very overused. So maybe that's the way you feel or were feeling? But that doesn't make it good writing simply because it came from a real place inside you. The meaning behind it could still be exactly the same, just with different words--different words that aren't tired, different words that you can't find in EVERY other set of lyrics written about the same feelings you are trying to portray.

I would share lyrics of my own, but that is one thing I do not write.

[Coprophagia]

i dont normaly write lyrics like that but it was easy to get it all out within the words i wrote

i'm in the process of writin a country song. i'm not really a country fan but everyone i work with is & i'm sick of hearing all this happy god lovin horsesh*t new school country all day everyday. so i'm writin one about a woman murdering her husband. it's mostly bits & pieces right now, just tryin hammer out the rough parts & tie it all together.

this part is right after a fight she locks her husband out of the house & he's tryin to break back in
she picked up my .44
and fired a shot through the door
which hit me square in the chest
i flew off the porch into the mud
and lay on the ground coughin up blood...

...as i was on my back starin at the sky
gettin myself ready to die
she stood over me & recocked the hammer of my gun...

....i told her 'it's a good thing you got me first
cuz what i woulda done to you woulda been much worse'....

& that's all i got for now. look for me in a bar near you [img]graemlins/evil.gif[/img]

[Coprophagia]

hahaha, that was funny